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Sea Side







I will sit her for hours.
and reflect when we were one
walking these sandy shores.
We watched waves roar in journeys
and collected sand dollars left on the strand.

We listened to sea gulls like I do now.
They cry lost love songs
as I long for your touch
that vanished like the low tide
leaving scattered remains of memories
and nothing else.






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  • Pentacle of Hope
    May 30

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    Please put your SN and the option you chose in the authors box, or i will have to DQ this peice.
    Thank You.

    THis is an okay poem, i'm not a big fan of love poems... but it's fairly good.
    Thank you for entering my contest.
  • individuality gold member
    May 10

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    ah the seas side, good old fashioned smiles where love can dance on beaches and maybe go for a ride on the fair, a good poem