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Goody

I call her Goody W, she disguises it well,
tears my ambition, drains my dreams, forces me
into the skin of failure she can’t disguise.
Her voice is a nail scritch-scratching, the flattened
vowels harsh and demanding
can only repeat whatever I say.

Once she made me welcome – gin and jokes
on Friday nights but now it’s
jealousy and the pitying looks she passes my way.
Control is all, but
to trail in her wake is death.

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For those who know the madness of a bad boss

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  • Topnotchsy
    August 10, 2008

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    Nice write. Congrats on the well deserved honorable mention. I'm sure that many can relate to this one


  • Xx.Toxic.xX
    August 10, 2008

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    very well written. friendship can realy turn around 360 degrees in the blink of an eye. i enjoyed this piece.


  • Seven Kinky
    August 10, 2008

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    Thankfully I've never had to deal with a boss like the one you've described. I've been through perverts and straight up...well...let's just say that one was a dragon wearing a human suit. Great write and congrats on the honorable mention. Cheers!


  • myron silver member
    July 22, 2008

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    Oh yes, some bosses can be a real trial! You have captured your hatred of her very well.

    best wishes,
    Myron.


  • Riamh
    July 22, 2008
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    good

    Thanks for sharing


  • Ken-Maverick
    July 22, 2008
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    good write


  • RyanosaurusWrecks
    May 12, 2008

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    I know well the madness of a bad boss..lol
    you have described this theme quite well, thank you for the fresh write


  • islekine
    May 11, 2008
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    An interesting write!

    Best wishes in the contest...
    Write on...
    *PEACE*

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