Blood flows red onto a white pedal
All I think of is how much I miss you
I wish I pray I dream I cry
All I did was love and sacrifice
Is blood not enough for you
What else must I do
What else can I do now
You're gone and I wont be here much longer
You were all I wanted
But you wouldn't listen
You let them get in between us
And it will scar me for life
I don't know what you were thinking
If I was happy with you
What makes you think I'll be happy with out you
It pains me to say but I don't know why
All I want is to see you cry
I want you to lose everything
I want you to hurt as much as I do
Now that you are happy with her
You say its your choice
But if you remember
You chose me first
But what happened
Blood flows red onto a white pedal
It takes a lot out of me
Not to say these things
But it hurts for me to think like this
A contest entry
- Anything and everything-prewrites allowed-2nd contest by Midgetbridgey.
350 points, ended July 11, 282 entries
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is this a better way to say that i wish the same pain on someone?
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passionate
"I want you to hurt as much as I do"
or maybe more - yeah I empathise completely, good stuff. -
The flow captivates. good word seletion, the emotion brews nicely within the poem. great sorrow, but not bitter to the point of annoyence. excellent work!!
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thanks im glad you like it hes the one i want to say Fuck you too lol
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