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Without You.

When I'm far from home

Never know what it feels like to be without you

The night tells a thousand lies

I feel so lonely way up here

Just waiting for the clock to chime

Time goes by so slowly and time can do so much

Won't you come

This cold air brings in such a distance to us

Sweet memories

To underscore our love affair.

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    May 20

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    You put your words together nicely. I know this was not an easy thing to do. Thank for you attempting this.

    Storm

  • islekine
    May 10
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    Looks good to me!

    Well done....Best wishes in the contest!
    Write on!
    *PEACE*


  • Riftkin gold member
    May 10
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    nice take on this different contest
    from StormGoddess

    Best of luck to you