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Haiku Sky

The clouds like cotton
The sky blue, like ocean waves
I love these nice days.

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  • Harlequin Dance
    January 22
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    It's very calm and gives a sense of serene happiness. This was just what I needed to read in my current state of mind.


  • luna-midnight gold member
    December 25, 2008
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    i really like this alot, hehe, so cute, and fun to read, im going to read it a few times, it makes me smile alot
    i think you are really good. keep writing, and take care
    Merry Christmas
    Stephanie ♥


  • Ellis gold member
    December 23, 2008

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    I like it cause it rhymes. I like the fluffy light happy feeling it gives me. This poem makes me feel good (and I don't usually feel good).

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  • Good One

    Quite a spectactular little poem you have written here using one of the coolest forms of poetry anby ways good deopth flow and good wrds really make this stand out quite nicely. good work and keep it up