Sitting gracefully in the firmament,
connection of spirit grows...
clouded judgment plasters life.
Reflections fade embers flame,
breezes whistling lightly...
blowing caution into the wind.
Heaven sensitizes my soul
with fragrances deep twilight,
aromas embrace of my heart.
Finally free from worldly stones...
Author notes
Not sure about the title!
picture promt...
~ Up-Up-and Away in Your Beautiful Balloon ~
A contest entry
- ~ Up-Up-and Away in Your Beautiful Balloon ~ by Desire.
700 points, ended May 14, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Heavens Freedom
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and after reading
several times, I kept getting words: Good for You
especially after inhaling the last line...
Felt this sense of rush like...finally Accomplishment!
For some reason~ I was seeing a teepee with a
Native American male sitting~ flames from a fire
brewing and his hands raised as if asking for Guidance
or speaking to Spirit~hearing words: The Great Spirit
Seeing word: smudging-cleansing
and feeling as if a ritual of some sort was done to rid the body of pollutants...hearing words: rid & pollutants~ Hopefully this makes sense~
Powerful images You have brought forth
These lines grabbed and pulled~
Heaven sensitizes my soul
with fragrances deep twilight,
aromas embrace of my heart.
Finally free from worldly stones....:
Beautiful take on the prompt~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~~*~
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a good piece that fits well in the contest...dig "clouded judgement plasters time"...very well done.
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