Words coated with venom
inject the cyanide into flesh,
rotting away the very core
of the heart of one's last breath
I see the little lies told
at the top of your bleeding tongue
I see the empty eyes as you
spew bull to each and every one
I know that people like you
only ever watch out for number one
And let me tell you something, baby,
one day, your luck will run out
When the starry night hits
the corners and reveals the lies,
you'll be the one left alone
curled up on your bed to cry
What give you the right to judge
someone who only ever loved you?
Or do you even stop to wonder
if maybe you're in the wrong too?
You once admitted to me that
you're not perfect; only human
But it seems to me that you don't
have one ounce of humanity within
that two-faced little face of yours
It's not easy being the girl
everyone wants to pick on is it?
Is that how you learned to take
all sides and twist it all to suit you?
I sure hope you learn your lesson one day
Something tells me that
little girl inside has to pay
for all kinds of crimes she's committed
Do you have anything to say for yourself?
What's that? More lies to tell?
Save it, baby, I'm done
Take a look in the mirror, precious
and look at the monster you've become
I hope you're happy with yourself now
One day, everyone will see past the lies
and into the disguise you wear, and then
the people worth your time will walk away
You think you're broken now, sweetie?
Just wait until karma comes your way
She can be a bigger bitch than even you,
and she'll catch up with you real quick
Fate knows you need it;
you've committed enough crimes
to last you a lifetime
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Right to the point as to why Karma will catch up to this person. Then from there, is nice and subtle, with hints as to what's coming, Then it's right there, plain and simple.
I also liked how you went from explaining into a dialogue of sorts. It really makes you feel like you were right there. Personally, when I was reading it, it felt like you were chastising me for a second, and that's perfect. To draw the reader in so much to make them feel the force behind the lines, it's just awsome. Very nice write
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wow. i wish i was able to be around to talk to you more but it's been so busy with people over and things this week O.o ugh man. i'm sneaking on now just to comment! fill me iiiiiin in an IM or something XD wonderful poem.
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im sorry
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I like it.
This is really good. i liked "the people worth your time will walk away" part. it's really good.
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HELL YEA!
KARMA IS A TOTAL BITCH...BIGGER THAN THE WOMAN YOU SPEAK OF IN YOUR POEM
NICEWRITE!
I ENJOYED EVERY LINE
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