I look you in the eyes
But we both glance down
Shyly i peek up to to see Her
Jelousy runs through my veins
Quickly turning to sadness
As we finally walk past,
I hold my breath
Wishing you would stop me
And She would be the distant memory.
Author notes
Sadly, this is the story of my life.
option seven, Distancerunner19, and "A Beautiful Lie"
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Comments
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Eh... Cliche. Not bad but overdone...
As a lot of things are.
I'm sure everyone can relate to this one though...
Thanks for entering and best of luck, -
we could all relate to this one...
the ending of a relationship and when the other moves
on and seems so darn happy...ouch.ouch.ouch...
well written we all felt each word and line vividly!
ears/Seattle
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Tisk Tisk. It is good byt I have to shake my head just because she likes him dosn't mean he likes her. Jelousy is the greened eyed monster and its going to eat you alive. But on a happier note really great poem nice flow to it.
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