Beneath,
vision is blurred.
Ultimate wisdom
shakes the fondation
of all humanity.
Sowing the seeds
,
blossoming, growth.
Evolution, emerging,
awakening.
Physical becomes obsolete,
as the spirit rises.
Breathe in the new earth.
A contest entry
- Contentment by z etoile.
300 points, ended July 15, 2008, 23 entries
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Lovely expression of poetry, your work flow together, I like the images, there was lots of passion in this, a, lot of food for thought. and a good message this is a Great poem There was no error. No typos. Nothing to change. I look forward to your next write
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wow great job I loved this especially since I continue to have reoccuring dreams about the world starting over. But I loved how you described that in this piece. Thank you for entering my contest.
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wow great job I loved this especially since I continue to have reoccuring dreams about the world starting over. But I loved how you described that in this piece. Thank you for entering my contest.
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Lovely indeed
I give this one a 10 it is truly a wonderful read
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I liked this, but, evolution is contradictory to creation, sis, can you explain what you meant???
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wise wise words
very compact and suggestive Ultimate wisdom
shakes the fondation
of all humanity.love these lines.great writing.
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Very good and uplifiting and a renewing of spirit
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thank you sweetie it was fun to write. God bless
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oh auntiee thisi s a fabssss write here
i lik it loads and loasds
so true so nice
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