I saw God in the flowers
I saw Him dancing in the trees
In the rush of a mighty wind
whisper in a breeze
In the laughter of the children
In the buzzing of a bee
In lightning's mighty power
Arising from the seas
I saw Him in a smile
And in the gently falling rain
In the mountains so majestic
And in endless fields of grain
I saw Him in the stars
And birds that soar so free
The place that I just love the most
Is to see Him rise inside of me
A contest entry
- Short Form Spirituals by Samplette.
600 points, ended May 13, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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From sea to shining sea. From the world outside and from within. HE is amazing as to what he can do. Wonderful write. ~Sie
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Thank you Nature Song for your comment. God IS Awesome!!!
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EXCELLENT
Beautiful this just blew me away simple short and sweet with lots of meaning then the last line excellent oh the feeling is awesome isn't it. My friend I enjoy all of your work my apologies for not being able to read more often but I love how you write the title is also fitting thank you for sharing this jewel the rhyme content fits perfect. beautiful heart song.
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Thank you Quaneefah for reading this poem. I tried to respond the other day but the site was glitchy, so I've been offline a few days. I do appreciate your heart-felt sentiments. God Bless!!!
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A very beautiful write. I liked the beat of this read, along with the words. Thank you for entering.
Sam
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Thanks Sam. I didn't realize the contest had ended. I'll try to be more timely next time.LOL.
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