Her smile
Her walk
The way that she talks
His laughter
His love
He’s never devoid of
Her bluntness
Her simplicity
Like static electricity
His warmth
His kiss
Something I miss
Her feel
Her want
Nonchalant
His fire
His heart
It tears me apart
My happiness
Don’t fret
Just let me forget
My joy
Don’t leave
Just make me believe
My love
Don’t run
You’re not just for fun
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Very cool lass,
This is really where you shine,
in your directness .....head on poetry.
Your desire is pure poetry.
...My joy
...don't leave
...just make me believe.
We all just assume that we use one another.
Great work ...you never disappoint lass.
PEACE,
LOWELL
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This draws you gently into the cocoon of two lovers and bathes you in the desires of their souls. Lovely job. Thank you for sharing this with me and best wishes to you in all of your endeavors. Keep that quill dipped in ink and ever ready for use dear poet.
♥ Touchof1der
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this is really good! i love it! there is a lot of emotion in it and i know kinda what you are talking about! I just love it babe! Awesome write!
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