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Safely Abed

Thunder arrives and night descends
as the rain begins to fall.
Drumming upon infinite leaves
with a rhythm like a song.
Little birds safely abed
inside vine covered walls.
Seeking refuge; they dream content
heads tucked beneath their wings.

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Rain, vines, night. word count 39.

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  • tara wilson gold member
    May 21, 2008

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    "Little birds safely abed
    inside vine covered walls."

    I love this imagery...a beautiful little poem Thanks so much for entering my contest..