Breathe in God's presence
Exhale the devil
Taking in good
Realizing the evil
Take advantage of each breathe
To bring in Him
And get rid
Of sinful thought
Author notes
Is Evil just another part of Good?
Evil is always there, good is always there, it is a matter of getting rid of the evil.
A contest entry
- Breathe by aliceramone.
600 points, ended May 15, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Good v.s. Evil by darlintlc.
450 points, ended May 28, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Great pic and great poem!!
"Taking in good
Realizing the evil"
great words..do good but know that there is evil out there!
Thanks for entering and good luck!
darlintlc -
I lpve the idea of breathing in Love and releasing the all things unlike Love. Nice reminder we can choose to stay in Love with just a single breath.
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your write is very refreshing and creative.
God bless...
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I don't really care for religious poems, but I guess this one was alright. I liked the format of your background.
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Thanks for your kind words again. It's great to know my poetry is appreciated by someone at least
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a good piece in the battle with duality...well done...thanks for entering and good luck in the contest.
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WOW!
Best of luck
♥
Stay safe
~Manda
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