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Why try?

Why do i even try?
When i see her all i do is cry, as she walks on by.
Is it all in vain,
All it equals is misery and pain.


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  • broken-angel
    May 28, 2008
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    good write hun...keep it up xx


  • Blessed-Be
    May 16, 2008
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    wow

    this is such a great poem...it makes you think


  • Sir Squigglim
    May 15, 2008

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    that BITCH! you are /not/ a piece of shit~ and she probably isnt good for you anyway. dont feel down about some chick.

  • who ever hurt you...is a bitch...ur a nice dude....well i think this is a great poem...keep it up.


  • JakOb-Black
    May 9, 2008
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    who is she?

    is this about all chicks or just one in general? awsome!!!!!


    • XxUnforgiven-EmoxX
      May 11, 2008
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      Who is she?

      Its someone i still know and yes, she hurt me... But its not her fault, i mean , who could love the emo piece of shit i am anyway...?

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