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Satanic serenity

with souls all possessed
i cant get them back
coal upon the face
transformed into black
with chains upon my ankles
i now cannot wait
my step restricted dearly
i lose each inch of faith
with pollution in my air
my halo now fades
each word on end
the hurt cascades
with oil upon my wings
i now cannot fly
my fantasies drowned
and the serenity shall die

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  • Midgetbridgey
    May 28, 2008
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