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A Soft Place to Fall

in a time of crushes
both liking Jesse
we learned to wear make-up

I told you my brutal secret
my father - a nightmare
you kept me safe

you still do

Author notes

This is for my dear friend Tracy who has help to keep me safe through the years. I love you! *tears*

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  • HeavensDaughter
    June 26, 2008

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    You know...Tracy is who came to mind when I read this...before I even got to the author's notes. She is a true friend! I am so glad that you are blessed with her. I hope you show this to her.

  • DragonFlyer
    June 24, 2008
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    I liked it,
    I don't know why.
    I didn't get it but I liked it.


  • michellemybelle gold member
    May 9, 2008

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    very powerful verse! I have a friend (angel) like this also, someone who pulled me out of a deep hole!
    thanks for your entry
    blessings,
    Michelle