my dear boy
you seem so fragile
but yet strong enough
to face what this world has comming
the wolves of this world
and their idle threats
has nothing compared to you
and the great power that you hold
your tears may flow
your heart may ache
but deep inside
lies the man you'll soon become
i know that i will lose you
someday goodbye will come
just remember this my boy
i'll always love you cause you're my son
A contest entry
- Please enter, i'm making a baby book of poems!!! by perfectsunset.
450 points, ended May 21, 2008, 39 entries
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Comments
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I loved this piece, it decribes exactly the feelings you would go through as a parent, thinking about their upsets and about the day when God will take them
...nice write..xxx
thank you for enteringa nd good luck
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if only everyone on AP can be like you. you look at what's important. the message.
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I havent been on Ap for ages... sorry im only getting back right now
reading your piece again was just as emotional as the first
you are really talented..xx
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This is a very sweet touching poem but doesnt really fall in the scope of what I was looking for. I will still allow it in my contest though. Thanks for enetering it.
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Aww so beautiful.. a true love for a son. Such a treasure to read, Thanks for entering & best of luck
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Stunning piece of writing here. Amazing. This is so well-written. It is so true too. A mother's love for her child [in the majority of cases] holds no bounds. You know what is about to come.
You are preparing for the word goodbye. Indeed, they must grow and find their own way in the world. Fly the nest, if you like. Yet as a child, they need you. But, that goodbye will come ever closer. I loved this. Keep writing.
Love
Wayne Leon
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Good luck in the competiton
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