When I was reaching
the edge of the rope
you held my hand
and pulled me back.
When the darkness came
and I became scared
you came to me and hugged.
In the Gobi desert
when I was suffering from thirst
You fetched a glass of water.
I love you for all of these
and I love you more for loving me.
Author notes
This poem is dedicated to my darling wife Mrs. Hafsa Faruq Samee.
A contest entry
- Something To Divert Me (pre-writes allowed) by piccola.
700 points, ended June 27, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Sounds like a mirage from the Gobi desert. Love can be like that sometimes, unbelievable. Well presented.
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nice poem
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Thank you for your comment,my darling wife Mrs. Hafsa Faruq Samee.
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beautiful tribute and thank you for entering
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Thank you for your comment.
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Thanks for writing this poem for me!
I love you
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