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Musings on a Lonely Night



In the midst of my turmoil
I stood up and told the universe
“I have not withered!”

The universe replied.
“You will.
Its just that my scorn
has yet to reach your heart.”

2
Under a moonless night
I feel alone.

A cold wind blows

I have felt
This before

But with a lesser passion

3

I sit up on  Look Out point
the moon delineates
pointed rocks below

The night wind sends me
the story of an old man

that in the crooning
has become me.


4

I see everything I once was
and should have become.

Like the rocks
I am beaten down.

Sifting away to nothing.
That is okay by me

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  • eclairluv
    May 9

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    These are wonderful! I love 2! I think these are always fun to read but I have never tried them myself...any advice?


  • Olivia33
    May 9
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    A sad poem; well written.