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someone smiling

as i walk day by day
drifting above myself
not controling what i'm doing
but just being there

the witness

sometimes it still looks a bit
muddled up to me
or maybe i'm just viewing it wrong
from the wrong prespective

i get confused

the sky looks like it's falling
closing in on me
but even so i see
someone in the far away distance

smiling

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  • Errant Panther
    May 10, 2008

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    lovely take on the prompt, it reads like what may have been in the artists mind when they came up with the image in the first place. thanks for sharing and best wishes.