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Nature Queen

Lovely child of nature, darting here and there
in the forest glades amid the trees and flowers
Playing hide and seek with butterflies and birds
while nesting in between the petals of a daisy’s bloom

One second you are here, then next gone from view
flitting from your home, the lotus petals
To plunge into a hidden pool filled by rain and snow
rising from the water, filling the air with smell of dew

We wait to hear the song of air that will come forth
from the fairy voice; singing of light and love
As you voice words of peace and love only heard
by those that are pure of heart

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Inspired by picture by picture prompt by: hiliuyun

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  • SuicidalLover
    May 10, 2008

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    Greatness. Your form is good, it sets the mood. Your imagery is nice. You painted the picture while seeing it. I thank you for your entry.
    ~Kystal Angel


  • Olivias Violin
    May 9, 2008
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    NICE!