Monster nipples
lactating silicone seedlings...
Author notes
who knows....?
A contest entry
- Five Little Words... by Ithica.
525 points, ended May 9, 2008, 21 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I'm surprised that the title of this poem didn't draw more readers, Ed!! Yes, who knows, some day this might be possible...but please spare me that
! Wow, you've packed so much into just 5 words. Well done!
~ Nicolette


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actually I read gold....this to me should have gotten it...I even vision tiny hairs like monster trees
haha...


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dudeman gacker!!!!! the milky way's got nothing left to fill its barges with now ... nope!! the more i read this dealy you wrote here the more i get me ... but there has got to be some soft, furry, squirming things inside somewhere dont you think?
...who knows
this one squeaks with metalic fluid complex webitry!!!
trophy like for sure
good one, trophy carrier!!!
dang!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Ha! Ha! Ha! Did you see me in my Halloween costume or what? I dressed like a piggy one year and had only 5 silicone baby bottle nipples to sew on my costume! I couldn't figure out how to make those nipples lactate for the life of me... my idea? Liebfrau Milche! hehehe!!!


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Brilliant!
This is a fantastic vignette! Best of luck in the contest!
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