Water Lilly glows
Glows soft as the full moon grows
Magick becomes her
A contest entry
- PIF *Quickie* Picture by SuicidalLover.
450 points, ended May 10, 2008, 5 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What is the best/worst part?
Comments
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such vivid visuals. congrats on the HM as well.
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Short simple and sweet. I'm glad you entered. It's penned wonderfully.
~Kystal Angel
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It means that imagining that she is magickal seems to just fit. And the full moon has always represented magick to me
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Very Nice
well I liked your concept with lilies ans the glowing aspect of how you incorporated the moon I was slightly taken back by whatcha mean by magick becomes her as that really tickled my mind trying to figure it out. over all a well penned Haiku but then again im a blonde & don't grasp things as easily as I should. good luck with the contest
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