my empty heart,
…keeps giving
Author notes
deeper thoughts with meaning
A contest entry
- Five Little Words... by Ithica.
525 points, ended May 9, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Only Prewrites by Samplette.
1000 points, ended September 20, 2008, 41 entries
Honorable mention
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Please tell me what you think
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A simple set of five little words. Uplifting and spiritual. Nice. Thank you for entering the contest.
Sam
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sooo true, thank God excellent write my friend
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the stores are all closing soon - when is there nothing left to give? I like the perception in this piece. chloroform and grappling hooks...
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It reminds me of motherhood... the well that never runs dry! Or so our children think! Thank-you for entering!
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It's all bound to come back. Not empty from apathy,but filled with compassions.Positive prose penned poetic Poet!
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this means love to me.
my pastor defines love as 'freely giving of oneself without thought of benefit or reture'
fantastic five words.
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Wonderful.
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A gift that never ends love that is known and is freely given. Impressive write my frind. ~Sie
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