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Annoy

Agitating someone to a point.
Not knowing that their getting mad.
Now after the result you understand.
Only now you're on the ground and covered in sand.
You really should'nt annoy unless you're faster then them.

im having a writers block month so yeah

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  • nirmal
    May 13, 2008

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    that brought smile

    sure it brought smiles on my face.. the last line was the Real Punch... i was wondering where this poem would lead to and yes it lead to the logical conclusion.. great poem dear.. keep writing and i would keep enjoying


  • KayJay
    May 9, 2008

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    You're on a roll (LOL) That's the cure - keep writing. Your muse is watching and laughing right along with me...
    Ken