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Igor and Vigo

You stuck your fingers in
and pulled

My chest
festering and moth eaten
caved before your palms

Every bitter memento
tucked against the canker
where my heart once was
tumbled out onto you
drenching your manson hoodie

Soaked with every
mistake I ever made
with every grimace
and heartache

And my single regret

You slowly turned
and left me standing in your driveway
my ribs bleached white by the sun

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  • layla.
    May 9, 2008

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    this is raw!!! wow.. umm i liked how the sound evolved!!! slow slow slow and LOUD and soft.

    write some more. the ending was super brilliant.