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What is sex

Nervous stance

unwavering glance

a shy step

quick embrace

softly lay

bodies sway

a deep kiss

throbbing heart

shaking hands

hair fans

rapid pace

toes curl

eyes closed

feeling exposed

moaning and panting

holding me close

minds are vexed

this is sex

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  • poetboi
    May 11

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    this poem is well in a very different style than I am usually used to, well written, a couple lines may need a bit of work, read through it and feel where it fits and doesn't fit.