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Examination of Love

 


Is this love that we feel
or is it something that is real?
Where did the rules of love come from?
What person, school, place, which one?

How does love really work?
Does anybody know here on
  earth?

Now I want you to come follow me
could love really be insecurity?
Not wanting to be alone?
Not wanting to be on your own?

Kissing, hugging, showing that you care.
Can all be done out of fear.

All I'm saying to be short
Maybe love is more than talk.
Maybe there are rules that make love strong.
Maybe it will help us all to get along.


Or just maybe love is just a name.
and don't really  mean a thing
or maybe, all of us are just
insane.

 

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  • Rusty
    May 20
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    Wonderful poem,Love is a mixture of so many feelings,I don't think we need to know what it is,I know I have been in love with my wife for the last 30 years,so there must be something in it,well written Brooklyn

  • luv2dream gold member
    May 18
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    We just don't know do we? Great poem!

  • great

    and especially the last line