Farther away from what we know.
Two worlds apart, unable to let go.
Fragmented memories, fallen dreams.
Drowning in chords of both our screams.
Grasping the air
To fall down in despair.
Reaching out with our minds
To find ties that bind.
Stretching together from lands far away.
Mountains straining to keep us at bay.
Lifted ban for just a while,
Then on one knee, you made me smile.
One year I'll wait
For what's told by fate.
Then together,
We'll be forever.
Two lives merged as one.
Smiling with the sun.
Together, the same.
You finally came.
Author notes
This is an odd poem for me because I don't normally like poems like this. But I can do it every once in a while.
A contest entry
- Bring Back Hope by sweetgirlwa.
700 points, ended May 21, 2008, 5 entries
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Comments
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very good poem alyssa! haha, you finally did a happy-ish one =P check your spelling. other than that, great work.


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Very nicely done. This really told a story and did bring the hope to the story. Thank you and good luck.


