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death doesn't hurt

i am the only one standing alone.
it's cold outside... my sun has never shone.
it's all so tragic, like a slaughter house.
no friends, no family, no spouse.

i heard that suicide is painless,
and it brings on many changes....
but suffering seems to be my life
all too easy to end with a knife...

perhaps a shotgun or elaborate hanging,
where you will all get to see my body swinging.
it's not like you want me to be in your life anymore
understand im now the family slut and whore.

fine. you'll get your wishes.
tonight i will be gone.

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i wrote this while listenin to icp "booey wooie wu"

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  • thesefadingstars.
    May 10, 2008

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    I hope u aint gone!!lol Na its good...I wish I could write that good! All of mine are sht!!!lol

  • corneraction
    May 9, 2008

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    Very Nice

    I'm doing a "cosplay" at a convention.. would you mind if I put this in my journal?

    You'll get full credit of course!