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Harvest

Blasphemous rutted jaws
Bravado of primitive tripe
Crucifix of rot rusted saws
Harvest of souls ripe
Eat the children raw

Author notes

heres to being lonely enjoy.

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  • Im2lost4love
    May 10

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    Eeeee Gadsssss, this is just horrid... The message not the poem. Well done for this picture. good luck.


  • KayJay46 gold member
    May 9
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    Well done darkly... a bit violent but true to itself from start to finish.
    Ken


  • Tattboyspet gold member
    May 9

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    sheesh!
    LEAVE THE DAMN KIDS ALONE WILL YA!!!!!!!

    loved the way you opened this one and it just got better as I read
    thanks for the entry