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Endless

**Endlessly Alive**

Endlessly the sky spins around
around...and around...inside my head
the imaginary shadows creeping
around...and around....touching my heart
it all makes sense now
so much sense so much now
...the end
so endless

Verse 1
i see the water below me
i see the fields...miles...and miles...
the city...which is engulfed in flames
just sitting i watch...watch as
the flames lick at silver
a silver bullet melting away
taking it all in.
lost in myself...so far away i am
from you
i guess it no longer matters...it doesn't matter

endlessly the sky spins around
around...and around...inside my head
the imaginary shadows creeping
around...and around...touching my heart
it all makes sense now
so much sense so much...the end
so endless....

Verse 2
Why can't i see whats right here
why can't i run from whats behind me
so alone now...so alone.
laying here watching the gray sky
as it opens up and cries on me
blurs my vision, I'm choking now
choking...choking...choking now
the end is soon near
oh how i don't want to go...i don't want to go...
oh no

endlessly the sky spins around
around...around...inside my head
the imaginary shadows creeping
around...and around...touching my heart
it all makes sense now
so much sense, so much...the end
so endless
{{Instrumental Bridge}}

Verse 3
i feel the air start to fill my lungs
i feel the grassy ground beneath me
the skies are becoming clear, oh so clear
the ocean so sparkling and calm
sitting up alive once more
i think it's time for a new change
alive once more

endlessly life goes around
around...around(again)...goes my life
the imaginary shadows i have beat
again...again...my heart is beating
it all makes sense now
oh so much sense, so much...the beginning
so endless
so endless....

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  • Adam26
    July 29, 2008

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    Good

    Hey there long time no talk another great write again the more you write the better you get i just loved the wat this was put together great write keep it up

    Adam


    • livingItup
      October 28, 2008
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      awe thanks you make me blush ^^
      and you bet i will.
      after this i have been dried up though.
      thank you Adam.

  • Revwilliamfoos
    May 21, 2008
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    very nice job on this one joey love your rev papa


    • livingItup
      October 28, 2008

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      thank you papa
      im glad you took the time to read it.
      it means a lot


  • Selithia
    May 15, 2008
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    Absolutely brilliant!

    I get from this [[ beautiful poem ]] an image of death and rebirth. I can smell the flames from the city and i can taste the waters of the ocean through your writing. I love how you described the sky as "crying" This is really beautiful and i am sorry about being gone for so long. Awesome job,joey,awesome job.

    • livingItup
      October 28, 2008
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      wow...im definitely speechless lol. your words make me want to write a million more. . its alright. just keep in touch ^^. thanks for reading this! ♥

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