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End of The Tunnel

End Of The Tunnel

Wake up from the wretched coma
Wake up and smell the aroma
The world squeezes you tight
So hard, cant see the light

Chorus
So can you,
Can you hear the thunder?
What the hell did i do
To recieve this wrath from you?
Often it makes me wonder
Is that a light at the End Of The Tunnel?
NO, its a freight train comin my way

This shit,
Makes me tire
Trapped in the eternal fire
This unforgiving fight
Still cant see the fight

Chorus

Well I say
Fuck this shit
I cant take one more bit
What have I done,
To be barred from the eternal sun?

Chorus

Chorus

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    May 12, 2008

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    Welcome to AllPoetry!

    I read this, then went back and read it again adding some music in my head. It works. Can definitely feel the dark edge of society laced in the words.

    I do have a suggestion. It might be a good idea for you to add an adult tag to this because of the use of language. There are people of all ages on this site, and we really don't want any youngins getting a hold of this kind of thing.

    Welcome to AP. If you have any questions or need help with anything, please feel free to IM me.
    Keep expressing through writing.
    Storm
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  • R. Cole Ph.
    May 10, 2008
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    NICE

    pretty good man prwetty good douch LoL