she is a holy flame within his soul
a movement mute ... a burning breeze
a fire felt within the freeze
of fear
she is soft Truth in his embrace
within reality, she is the Dream
she's Ecstasy within his scream
so clear
she is his bright Foreverness
his urgent need's sweet bliss
pure laughter still amiss
within his tear
she is his Kingdom's sultry grace
to his yearning she's the face
whispers behind a wisp of lace
seeking his ear ...
she is his unseen Aideen
myra
20.12.2003
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... how his yearning moves my soul ...
Written December 19th, 2003
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she is his Kingdom's sultry grace
to his yearning she's the face
whispers behind a wisp of lace
seeking his ear ...
she is his unseen Aideen
... oh it's beautiful. It moves and moves.
~Scarlet -
What a refreshing drink at Myra's spring!! Nearly like we don't know how special the geiser will be from your well of thought
Hope and moving on....Y es...Lovely touch..oh dear, humble servant to God's people!
Thank you
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Thank you, Brian, for inspiring me ... and for Forever being Hopeful ... Hugs, too ...
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*hugs*
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Oh wow..... this is really complimentary to Brian's work. Once I post this I'll be back to add an applause.!!!!!!! This is classic Myra at her best.... classic you!!!!! Nice work Myra.......... many blessings to you this holiday season.
purity birthed
in the fresh Spring of mankind-
stunning love
Don -
lovely write
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Peaceful Piece
Your words touch so many sweet soul, I love the heart in you...
I only hope you know we all appreciate how you share your wisdom and love so dear, and no matter who you speak of, or to, it's your heart that shine's crystal clear, thanks for sharing!
Many Blessings, and Merry Christmas!
-Timothy -
One of the best things, about this site, Myra, in my opinion, is how one poet feeds another. How one can read anothers thoughts and be so moved as to write from their hearts concerning what grew there, transplanted from another's work. Brian, is very talented....and very open in many ways. As are you, this was beautiful poetry, made more so, because it came from the heart of a friend....
God Bless you, Myra...for who you are.
Maddie -
Excellent
"she's Ecstasy within his scream"
I must have read this ten times. Wow. Very expressive and meaningful. Overall, excellent work and touching. Looking for more of your work.
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Falling (in) love is part of the parcel, Ali-p ...
Thanks for reading ...
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boy / girl thingy!!!
nice piece myrataal...
love isn't a thing I'm talented to write about nor too fully understand when I read of it but as a poem I liked this piece.
"Reach for the stars ... and you will perhaps get the moon"...
again I'm not too talented at that either - I fell off my ladder
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yes Ms.Lochner your soul indeed must dwell in the soul of purest
poetry...For everyone- the richest of the rich and the poorest of the poor have the same soul and that is if you can put it one way the mirror of the almightly lord himself...
I know why you write such wonderful poetry,they belong to the realm of some other world...Not really the one in which you and me dwell physically...
Lots of love to you, beautiful poetess, for letting your wonderfully beautiful soul shine through just words...
Muse
Edited on Dec 21, 1:10 because 'JUST like that!!'. -
This is beautiful Myra, curious about who it's about. Love these ending lines....sigh
"she is his Kingdom's sultry grace
to his yearning she's the face
whispers behind a wisp of lace
seeking his ear ...
she is his unseen Aideen"
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I am glad you enjoyed this, Kathy ... Thank you for reading!
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Thank you for reading, Sunflower ...
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Thank you dearest Mitchybaby ... I returned the favour, and I will read you again ...
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Of course she is being idolized, sweet Brazos! Sometimes that is not such a bad thing, you know ... Reach for the stars ... and you will perhaps get the moon
The rhyming scheme as you put it, just happened. I was under the spell of Aideen, so she - and Brian - deserve(s) the appreciation.
Yes - as usual, I love you too
Thanks for reading!
Myra -
Hi Myra! I thought your rhyming scheme here was terrific as well, but I much more appreciated the message. Must be a lucky man, and a lucky woman as well, to have such depth in their love. But it seems, in your poem, that she is idolized. I am not saying that is a bad thing, but is such a thing possible without reciprocation? Perhaps I misread you on this one....
Anyways, beauty of a write, and I love your poetry [and you], as usual.
Brazos
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superb
Exceptionally beautiful, Myra. Stellar word choice. Very moving and full of love. Thanks for sharing your wonderful talent
~Kathy -
Lovely write Myra yes this is romantic and beautifuly crafted You reflect the soul and its tenderness so well my dear friend.
Hugs and love
Sherry
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I absolutly fell in love with this poem!!! I love the rhyme scheme. You did an AWESOME job. Keep writing
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