The night sky's darkness is inescapable
Only half a moon to light a path,
to a beautiful pale woman swinging
A charming man appears suddenly
Greeting her with a deeply desired kiss and gift
"Here love it's your 1600th birthday"
A contest entry
- Quickie!! PIF (pic prompt) by Angelflower.
450 points, ended May 9, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is breathtakingly beautiful! Love it!
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Wonderful...
Birthays are fun aren't they...
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!! Yay you finally write about something cool...no offense And you used red writing like it was blood YAY!
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an excellent take on the prompt and a great poem. keep it up
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oooooohhh my jebus!
O.O
i luv luv luv luv luv luv FREAKIN LUV vampires!
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I'm kinda disappointed. Because I read this in about two seconds and it seems like there's something more to this story then what we presented. But what you did present in the limited space works quite well and you would never really expect the ending that you made.
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I love the ending!! this was sweet and funny all in one! that is talent! welldone.. I really liked this take on the prompt!! Best of luck!
Angel
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A beautiful take on the prompt you have here. It's dark and full of imagery. Great write!! Good luck in the contest
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Cool!! Love that ending.. lol... excellent for the prompt
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awwwwwww I love this! I love vampires! and the pic goes perfect! hope you win the contest
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