The cracks in our lives
Reflected in my galss cage
Keep me from you...
...Keep me from me
I tried to reach out
Push through that weak spot
You cut me down...
...You cut you away
Left here alone and cold
Emotionless I'm numb
From the pain you cause...
...from the pain I should feel
We are so fragile...
...In our glass cages
Author notes
(Picture credit: we are so fragile by blueblack)
My first contest....argh!
A contest entry
- SEMI QUICKIE P.I.F. Picture Inspired..Darker rather then lighter this time round ;) by MaMa-2-be-Cindy.
500 points, ended May 10, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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excellent
wonderful concept. very true. -
I thank you for your kindness on my work and love the glass cage idea. very powerful image.
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An excellent entry for you first contest. A fab take on the picture...good luck
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Hey I think it is a wonderful first attempt..It fit so well with what I was asking for.. you went deep and dark and I felt your words..Thank you and good luck
Cindy
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