Within the realms of this emotion,
it begins with just a spark.
All shadows disappear
as light overcomes the dark.
The spark ignites a flame.
The flame warms the heart.
The embers warm the soul
Your eyes reveal its start.
Your words begin to soften
As your lips recite its praise.
It often comes so natural
through a shimmery misty haze.
Your vision seems to focus
In totally different light.
Reflections of this emotion
Blinds us, at its sight.
Your ears hear an angelic chorus
As wings flutter in our soul
Our breath submit to sweet soft sighs
As this emotion takes control.
Words seem to escape us.
Silence can say it all.
Through windows to the soul
We hear loves passion call.
In a list
A contest entry
- Romantic Pre-Writes by poets whisper.
700 points, ended December 13, 2008, 39 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Silence can say it all.
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ok, how on earth, have I missed all of these! Unbeliveable. Ok now to your poem.
I love how it flows and all ties,and falls with one another. -
i agree with jetleena[ps shes my kity mistress now
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but wow this is really intense it shows the so much good that comes with love, your such an amazing poet :]
love ya kitty kat
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Bravo!!! lol.. this was a really intense yet sweet poem.. Full of loves understanding..(if that makes any sense) I really loved this.. well done hun..
Jetleena
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