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Feelings

If you understood
What you meant to me
Your time, Your tenderness
Just how you make me feel
Those Goosebumps
I can't control my heart
Your tender words
Oh my god, I really miss my muse

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A poet needs a muse,

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  • A floatingleaf silver member
    May 27, 2008
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    Well said, even without muse...


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    May 10, 2008
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    Beautiful!!!

    Every Poet knows exactly what they need... Well Said!!!


  • gullionmar
    May 9, 2008
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    good

    nice write

  • June-bug
    May 9, 2008

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    So tender and beautiful...full of longing. So very true a poet can't produce much if the muse is missing.