What a boring picture feeds my eye
So awful, painful, make body cry
Sad weed, flowers like dandelion,
Can't love it whatever I try on.
A contest entry
- #71 at Winklings for members and Friends from Allpoetry. by Lyndon.
3000 points, ended June 7, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I am so sorry
a eucalypt flower-head had this effect. My apologies.
Lyndon of the Winklings. -
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No, no!! Tis I who should grovel - it's just that I like to think outside the box and, in this instance, your melodious thinkings about the picture pushed me to the edge and a dandelion came into mind! But, then, I pull flowers up and leave weeds! LOL
Donald
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