The gates, her voice
they whisper and call me closer
everyday.
Misspent time when here
now departed.
Soon eight years, her death anniversary.
I’ll approach the gates and ponder entry.
just to see her again
Author notes
http://darkartists-inc.deviantart.com/art/broken-world-84282277
Wriiten and true about my mum.
A repeat of the message is in Italic through out the poem
backfround belongs to created by Kari,Kaleidoscope
In a list
A contest entry
- Pic Prompt PIF.... yep, another!! by kiwigirljacks.
800 points, ended May 10, 2008, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - One hour to give me all your prewrites!! by LeilaJayne.
1000 points, ended June 1, 2008, 69 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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WOW. Simply stunning. I can see why you won the gold.
Your emotions that you've penned are excellent
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Thanks Cuz , sometimes the emotion about my mums passing is easy to share others, not so lol
I am roud of this one, i know she would be too
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Wow, this was so powerfully written, with the last two lines being particularly deep and emotional. Amazing write!
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oh, this was so well written...it almost made me cry..but then again it's close to the anniversary of my grandmothers death...so I know this feeling..atleast this is how i interpreted the poem. I can def relate...btw congrats on the gold!
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you interpreted right is leaning more to being about my mums death anniversary
thanks for your comment
Cindy
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This is s beautifully written poem. A most enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing and congrats on the well deserved gold.
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This poem is very intriguing, it sucks you right in. Nice job
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Thank you so much
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Beautiful in it's sadness! I love the message here.. and I really liked how the italic'd (sp? lol) told the story also.. this really is a stunning piece that tugs at the heart
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If I dont have my real mum, im glad for mum on here and you SiS. this was hard to write but she ahs been on my mind so much with bloody mothers day tomorrow
lol
Glad it got the thoughts out
Cin
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wow....Cindy..this is very very good....thanks so much for the share...
Simon
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Thanks Simon...this one seemed to easy to wirte lol
Cin
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Aww a beautifully penned piece, much luck in the contest hunni
Love the BG too!
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Thanx darl..and Kari made it, so gorgeous..im gunna be winning anohter gold membership pretty soona fter this is up lol..I love using backgrounds and putting pics up with poems heheh
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Congrats on the gold hunni I love making BG, they can be as addictive as these quickies..lol.
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i bet they can be
thanx darl i feel honoured to have won
I cnt make bckgrounds..but im going to download a program etc..and start lol trying lol
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emotional one..tuned to appeal to heart..well written dear sister
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Stunning
Wow! you sure captured the picture's true essence and beauty. You made it REAL with emotions and past experiences, knowledge. Simply, breath-taking...
Good luck in the contest hun!
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Very cleverly done, you are getting stronger with each piece you pen, a sign of the talent you have within. Love, C
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Aw thank you, so kind,
Cin
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beautful sisy
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Thanx SiS
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