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Four little words

Unbandage my heart again

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lol i tried

A contest entry

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  • Ithica silver member
    May 9, 2008
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    Yes Pleeeze!!! But only if the bleeding has stopped!!! hehe! Thank-you for entering!!!


  • stevens5613
    May 9, 2008

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    Very good write, and good choice in words. I think everyone can realte to it really.

    Blessed be
    Chris
    XXX


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 9, 2008

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    Those words are so powerful!! I think our hearts are often bandaged and need freeing


    Love it... and you!!

  • Nighttime angel
    May 9, 2008

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    wow this is quite powerful sweetie.. Outstanding job with this one. I've been down this road before. I am sure that there are many who can relate to this.

    good luck in the contest

    mommy

    I Love you