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They say that love
Makes fools out of us
I guess I'd agree

They say that it's
Better to have loved
And lost too

But my mind
Cannot see how you can
Put words to a feeling
When feelings have no meanings
in words

I cannot see why they try
To explain an
Unexplainable feeling
When they say
that the unexplainable
is just that,
unexplainable

I push to experience the
experiences that I
have not experienced
Though others exerience
in words

Only to stop
rewind the clock and see
I'm not experiencing at all

To experience is to be
soley in the now
and not the then
and words aren't expressions
of the now only then
So I cannot experience
the then of words

So when they say
It's better to have loved and lost
I cannot see the whole meaning
because I've lacked the experience
of these words
When they say that love
makes fools of us
I cannot comprehend
for I see fools in love and not
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