Broken down by years of abuse
my flame is wilting from sight,
and I wish to prevent such a thing.
It only takes a spark to get a fire going...
Author notes
30 words
Option 2 - "We all became such fragile, broken things
A memory remains just a tiny spark
I give it all my oxygen"
Paramore - Let the flames begin.
Picture credit: Angel of fire rebirth by garun at deviantart.com
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A contest entry
- My first ever quickie.... by LeilaJayne.
300 points, ended May 9, 2008, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What to do in an insane world?
Comments
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*blows really hard to put it out*
Nice write daughter..
very proud of you!
Dad
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Excellent sis!! Love the strength to fight in this!!
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Oh wow, i really love this!! Nice take on the prompt, its weird cause its like my favourite song but ive never really thought about the meaning of it, but the last line of this really summed it up. Awesome =] xxxx
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wow this
this is awsome
goodluck
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