Lying in the grass
Looking up at the stars
Thinking about the past
Wondering where you are
I can see your face
So clearly in my mind
Can't help screaming out
Why'd you leave me behind?
Life's a fragile thing
It can easily be taken away
Accidents happen all the time
Which is why you're not here today
No matter where you are
And how I wish you were here
I will keep your memory close
My heart will keep you near
I long for the days that've been erased
I miss your bright smile
I crave the days you spent with me
I've missed them for a while
I think of you often
You're here with me always
Even in moments of weakness
I see you through the haze
Life's a fragile thing
It can easily be taken away
Accidents happen all the time
Which is why you're not here today
No matter where you are
And how I wish you were here
I will keep your memory close
My heart will keep you near
I know you're watching over me
You're never far
Like an angel standing guard
There you are
Please tell me what you think
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You really know how to bring tears to my eyes and leave it were I dont know what to say you know that right. As I read this it so reminded me of my aunt Love the part where you wrote
I know you're watching over me
You're never far
Like an angel standing guard
there you are
I know what you are saying here.. Excellent job
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Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed this
I think anyone that's ever lost someone can relate to poems such as this one. Things like this can either bring you pain or fond memories, sometimes both. But it's nice to read something like this once in a while. But, yeah, thanks for reading. I'm glad you liked it.
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Oh my... You have done it again, I... I can hardly express myself, for you left me speechless... (Takes a moment.) Wow simply a great piece; I loved every line, especially the ending.
"I know you're watching over me
You're never far
Like an angel standing guard
There you are”
Thank you for another beautiful poem.
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haha, thank you much, I'm glad you enjoyed this so much. Personally I liked the ending too, I thought it tied it all together nicely.
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AWESOME
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Thank you
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