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Your Smile

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While sitting at my darkened window
As a cold, gray rain was falling down,
I saw you smile to greet the morning
And a miracle swept across the town.

The yellow sun came out to greet you
And all the trees forgot that it was fall,
Bursting into bloom despite themselves.
And a rainbow shimmered above it all.

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  • SeptemberFaith
    November 4, 2008
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    Mark,

    This made me smile.

    Criss


  • Pollycheck
    May 25, 2008

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    Thank you for entering my short poems contest. You must have very deep feelings for the person that you wrote this poem about.


  • Sara Bellem
    May 15, 2008

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    Aw, very sweet. It reminded me of my hubby. I think I know who you're muse was for this masterpiece BEST WISHES on this contest!!!


  • PonyPride
    May 12, 2008
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    very cute poem but I wanted you to focus deeper on one color

  • brkn4u
    May 9, 2008
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    aww

    i like it its sweet sounds like something that should be in a valentine card or soemthing good job

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