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Thoughts of chalk(small Epic)

Eating Calluses with Mr. Cascading Kangaroo
Thoughts of Chalk
Kas.K.


Bouncy incoherencies
Like a Plushy poked cheek
Fruitful and delicious tendencies
like  the  crunchy fuzz on meek bubbles
Cascading  kangaroo's paper cup
filled of the worldless full of non-dependencies
The incredible terribles of double troubles 
We fear to understand the tomorrow we fear to enter 
For  the artificial  of the officially illogical  organic Rubex cube,
the sensible nonsense's  toe jam that spreads easily on toast
not so pleasantly on the mind's ego

Talks and more Talk  he rambles from the tales of many chalk:
“Miss me bet ya can't kiss me
Bind me in plastic wrap and
Kiss me  wrapped in all  that foil wrap.

Call me a non-beneficial profit 
Swipe me sticky or lose the credit
Punch in the code,  and rape a orange
sell  it to the world my fruits number
Demand the object again and again
And play hopscotch over mothers'  and fathers' face
You step on damnation's crack you break there back
Then Meeting only  with your face to the cement: the sound of splatted meat
You swore you heard  angels but you met death's mother
the lesson of her cookies and the end of her broom stick
Salivating for salvation  the tasting of bones in the cement luring the wolves
They hunger and they'll eat you alive leaving only little footprints
that little girls will question wide eyed and giggling on
demand the object again and again
we will reject the thought but accept the act
Racism, you're a fucking mutt, get off the side walk
They call you a black  and you say you heart sally
Racism rotting on some  black farting corpses
that some  white trash  forgot to putt  themselves in the waste dump
The pride of the rainbow does not float or hover
The pride of the rainbow
totters on in wars on  dead corpses from the crusades and witch hunts
I heart rainbows for at every end
there's an ugly old green midget
who's ass I gotta kiss to gets me some gold
but greed is free and addictive, one of the top drugs along with egotism
the pride of the rainbow does not float or hover
the pride of the rainbow
The feigned,  feared and bloody sharp freedom
I am black  proud and fucking loud
I am gay    I am straight t I am bi and  its no lie
Ill  die hard and live free
Give it  to me, Give it to me bitch! or  I will  mow you down
with my demands  from my dream's selfish weed-wacker
And I will  wack and hack you down mercilessly 
No ,Not I but..
the selfishness of my stomach will
The starvation mushing mountains  into a Gerber baby sauce
  eating trillions of baby fuzzys
cruelty of survival  has  eaten our tongue
the taste of the world: iron, rusty iron
the Blades to our turkey necks but we do not die but drown in the rain
because we have forgotten how to dance move or even close our very mouths
I  taste me so not to taste you
but  in tasting me I taste  the world and  it's children
now come tell me of your hilarious  things called " time"
" reality" and " worlds"  I  felt  from a rumor that you things are and be
in objects called ways”
____________
The end.



Simplified to complication
Lets play pretty ponies  and be my pretty pony
with Cascading kangaroo  he who wishes play too
the taste of luck  a mouth full of golden pony feet
lets play pretty ponies giving kisses only on the cheek
Inquiring Neighborly love  to use as an advantage
We knock on cascading kangaroo's door
But its child  said Never  ever open it, never ever enter it
To bad so sad
Never ever say never  for it then is bound to be an endeavor
To late we've have fallen up
  making out with  the skies pavement
A hall lost in horizon's vanishing point
The walls bellow and breath as the doors chirp clicks and clacks
Grab hold of your  rubber ducky  and towelly
We're off in a ride in the great snot  of the many

The improbability  drive has puked,  engulfing  us
Inside out  and out side on the inside 
Spiraling we are not going we are not stopping
but  not  here but there moving over here
We are up going down
The insanity of the spiraling sane
Meeting the  eccentric conniving Cascading Kangaroo
The nostrils on his butt sneezing out another timeless universe
The babel fish in our ears it is still hard to comprehend
"come in out?" he greets  the sound from his matted pouch pulsating" make yourself planted"
" No, no I mustn't I  merely  wanted ask if you have a spare tablespoon of 5 planted  whales? Or a few toileted poodles "
sitting on the fullness of the empty
the  chair is on your head
the rejection became the acceptation
our eyes  had long protruded  confusion we lost sight, now  still blind
everything is beyond reality or truth,
the starvation of comprehension:
he spoke " come, go, what does it matter now lets, I have many grand tales from the great chalk of your thingys er.. 'times'"
" shall I get the calluses?"


He begins to recite wisdom's stupidity  and thoughts of chalk
“Miss me bet ya can't kiss me
Bind me in plastic wrap and
Kiss me  wrapped in all  that foil wrap…”

Author notes



This is after being surrounded by alot of people in a public school and after i was fraged and just tired of people probably my weirdest poem



option 2 Schizophrenia




"Give me picasso on a typewriter" Alright here ya go !

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  • G-y-p-o
    September 3, 2008

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    'Bouncy incoherencies
    Like a Plushy poked cheek
    Fruitful and delicious tendencies
    like the crunchy fuzz on meek bubbles
    Cascading kangaroo's paper cup
    filled of the worldless full of non-dependencies
    The incredible terribles of double troubles
    We fear to understand the tomorrow we fear to enter
    For the artificial of the officially illogical organic Rubex cube,
    the sensible nonsense's toe jam that spreads easily on toast
    not so pleasantly on the mind's ego

    Talks and more Talk he rambles from the tales of many chalk:
    “Miss me bet ya can't kiss me
    Bind me in plastic wrap and
    Kiss me wrapped in all that foil wrap.'

    I love the start of this poem. Such an unusual peice.


  • skitza
    September 3, 2008

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    Hi. I enjoyed reading this poem, and I wish I had written it first to be honest. I would be proud if I had, because it is very unique. I like the way you said 'The end' when it wasn't. I also like the repetition of the letters used in all the right/wrong places. Very interesting to read.
    'Bouncy incoherencies
    Like a Plushy poked cheek
    Fruitful and delicious tendencies
    like the crunchy fuzz on meek bubbles
    Cascading kangaroo's paper cup
    filled of the worldless full of non-dependencies
    The incredible terribles of double troubles
    We fear to understand the tomorrow we fear to enter
    For the artificial of the officially illogical organic Rubex cube,
    the sensible nonsense's toe jam that spreads easily on toast
    not so pleasantly on the mind's ego'
    I also liked it when you said 'I am black proud and fucking loud
    I am gay I am straight t I am bi and its no lie
    Ill die hard and live free'... Contradiction is always good.

    Thanks for entering.
    skitza


  • Exit-Stage-Right
    August 17, 2008

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    Funny, morbid and abstruse all at once. No thread other than the 'now' and the vexation of the 'here-to-fore'.


  • peregrin
    July 31, 2008
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    Very...
    different...
    Good entry,
    and good luck!


  • nature
    July 31, 2008

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    Unique

    But i freaked out

    congrats for the poem and the long list of contests.
    I have suffered let others to suffer.

    WHAT A MASTERPIECE

    Congrats,
    Full points to you with honor.


    • SoulfulBubbles
      July 31, 2008
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      it is kinda freaky and long

      it may be a little to intense XP
      but it was of the moment when i wrote it

      ^-^

      thanks for commentin


  • Dark Otter
    July 29, 2008
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    Sensory Overload!

    Neural network shut down. Neuroses negate complicated litarary criticism. Nickled to death with nails of narcisstic noodling. Must refain from fearful fragments fondling fool's feats of freefalling in an universe of self. In other words, "She's having fun, now."


  • sins and sorrow silver member
    July 26, 2008

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    This makes me feel like a child lost in daydreams!!
    Very silly and yet oh so serious and deep!
    To some, this is pure nonsense I'm sure but this is poetry my friend!
    Beautiful, intriguing, absolutely wonderful poetry!
    Amazing job! Great imagery and fantastic metaphors!!

    One thing I would like to mention, is which option you decided to go with. I could probably find a couple of the categories I have layed out for this one to go into. Haha it was that good that it fits different definitions, but for the sake of my own sanity please settle with the one you think suits this piece!

    Loved it! Way to set the bar high for my contest!!

    • SoulfulBubbles
      July 26, 2008
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      hmm does Schizophrenia work you think? because honestly i have no idea which would perfectly work with this... or maybe 9- Panic Disorders
      10- Substance Use Disorders ( @,@ >.< )


      ug cant decide could i just go with my favorite : 2- Schizophrenia? is that alright?

      • sins and sorrow silver member
        July 26, 2008
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        Schizophrenia is perfect! That was the first thing that came to mind when I read this! lol!
        thanks for entering and best of luck by the way!


  • xwarriorXprincessx
    July 24, 2008

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    damn.

    this shit is bananas.

    .... and i fucking love banana pudding.

    this is so amazing. it makes no sense, and it makes perfect sense. i love the imagery. i often times wish my work could be as analogous as this. it is deliciously random, yet surprisingly on task.

    it nearly has the air of ani difranco, and she is my bitch. the analogy and contiguous flow relaxes and intrigues me.

    as for the situation that led this to be this epic, i hope you found/find some kind of answer or hope in the endless wave of seeming helplessness. I certainly hope someone was there to reach out.
    very well done, my good man. best wishes.

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