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Tears

Silent
      tears
          Silent
                  cries

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  • Clovis...Curious silver member
    September 18, 2008

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    Excellent

    Wow, reminded me immediately of someone who is silently suffering from a form of abuse; and has not yet found a way to escape from her/his abuser. Very well written, indeed.


  • Atrophya
    September 10, 2008
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    captivating and strong.


  • LilyRose
    May 20, 2008

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    Feeling an opening from depths closed for so long I sense this is a great beginning and I feel there is so much more, so great that even in the darkness there is beauty to be found and love worth holding.


  • Ithica silver member
    May 9, 2008
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    So very deep! Thank-you for entering