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Seductress In the Window




She sees me looking at her from the window
and she opens the shades to show her white teddy
She bends forward exposing the cleavage of her breasts
and then she looks at me, her dark eyes clear on this night
Her tongue begins to travel around the border of her mouth.

Her hips begin to swivel and I want her.
In the flash of a second I am with her.
My lips upon her lips.
My breath hot and impassioned.

We squeeze together  
I place here on the ocean of her bed
and float on top of her like waves on the sea

One button at a time
I undo her
and caress her
everywhere with my tongue.

Her skin is brown
lips plump and red
She smells of honey water.

I feel her nectar flowing
as I thrust inside of her soul
We feel the skin sliding against skin
with no friction
as the oil does its magic.

She is to the point
of orgasmic tears
and then we come to the point
of no return as a lightning bolt
bursts up our spines.

We are jolted together
I waken from the vision
She smiles from her window
Her fingers circling between her legs.

The light goes out
I smoke knowing
I will wait for her tomorrow.

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Comments

  • This was just really amazing..
    The imagery was so vivid..
    It was so sensual and "moving" to say the least..
    I really enjoyed reading this.. You did a wonderful job..

    Best of luck.

    Angel
  • Oh my This was so intense.
    you sure no how to make the visions dance.


    Delila


  • azlyn gold member
    May 9

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    Jeff...you are such a sensual artist!!! This is just delicious!!! I really love it! Thanks for the entry...

  • Splendid mmmmmmm

    Was just checking out Azlyn's contest when I came across your entry. I enjoyed how this was woven together as a vision rather than a reality and the closure of anticipation.