Confessions

I'm sorry
stops bleeding.

A contest entry

Four Little Words... by Ithica. 825 points, ended May 9, 2008, 20 entries
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By me, right now

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chiefmac
May 10, 2008
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How quick and how lovely. The metphor does work, no wasted words.
notorious
May 9, 2008

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Ooh, I can't believe this didn't win anything. It's got bluntness and wryness in such brevity!! Way better than what I did...LoL
delightfulmess
May 9, 2008

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LOVE this dad.

Delila
Ithica
May 9, 2008

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Our inherent coagulating capabilities are available without a visit to the ER!!! Yet simple words that are often hard to say??? Thank-you foe entering!!!
daisygirlk
May 9, 2008

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Wow, I had to think about this, but it only took me half a second to decide it was interesting and I like it. Hmmmm... I can't put it in words. Good work.
Nature Song
May 9, 2008

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From within we forgive, and we begin to heal! Very well said. And with so few words! Very creative. ~Sie
going nowhere
May 9, 2008
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so true... and...

forgiveness can heal wounds.
Raggedee-Ann
May 8, 2008

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Wow, the words make me think of forgiving...

I'm sorry, = to forgive

stops bleeding = healing

I suppose I have a strange mind! Interesting four word write!
poeticweaver
May 8, 2008

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True
Very well done brother!
All the best within the contest!

Brother Timothy