six, six, six,
seven sins
sultry sex
supple,
dancing muscle
devour me,
so sweetly
conquer me
to set me free
six, six, six
seven seconds,
four hours,
of blissful,
potent powers
viscid visions
foxed sunflower
consume my,
fledgling bloom
fill the need,
for this seed
to be forever freed
six, six, six,
seven sins
salty sex
supple,
dancing muscle
devour me
tread it to the boundary,
to conquer me,
and set me free
whats going on in your portals girls and boys?
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Very nice. I love the alliteration and the visual aspect of your writing. Thank you for sharing your poetry.
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sexier than any of your pieces that i have read before, but in a subtle and kind of violent way - in a way that may be almost unintentionally sexy and a way that may be resentful, but it's all so compelling nonetheless...
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What a loop! I like that your words seem to weave in and out of each other with "six six six" being an adhesive repetitive to hold it all together. So sinfully enticing.
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I love the alliteration in this poem!
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beautiful
I love it! I love the six six six repeat also! Great wording and imagery! Thanks for sharing it!!
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